雅思寫(xiě)作連接詞錯(cuò)誤有哪些
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雅思寫(xiě)作連接詞錯(cuò)誤有哪些1:雅思寫(xiě)作連接詞錯(cuò)誤ontheotherhand一般引導(dǎo)對(duì)比的東西,不等于besides,furthermore,secondly例子:Manyyoungpeopleenjoyonlineshopping.ontheonehand,itsavestime.Ontheotherhand,itsavesmoney.評(píng)講:savetime和savemoney是兩個(gè)并列的有點(diǎn),沒(méi)有對(duì)比的關(guān)系,最好用firstly,secondly。2:雅思寫(xiě)作連接詞錯(cuò)誤onthecontrary以為是Incontrast的替換詞例子:Thebirthraterose.Onthecontrary,theinfantmortatalityratedropped.評(píng)講:onthecontrary一般出現(xiàn)的語(yǔ)境是前面出現(xiàn)否定信息。這個(gè)詞組基本上不用于雅思作文。3:while,whereas認(rèn)為是incontrast的替換詞例子:Thebirthraterose.Whiletheinfantmortatalityratedropped.評(píng)講:while是從屬連詞,要連接兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子,這里應(yīng)該是“,while”或者改成“incontrast”4:besides,furthermore,what’smore,moreover,inaddition被認(rèn)為是“遞進(jìn)”的連接詞例子:Manypeopletodaychoosetostudyinforeigncountries.Besides,theycangainqualificationsinforeignuniversities.評(píng)講:besides一般引導(dǎo)兩個(gè)并列的觀(guān)點(diǎn),不指代因果關(guān)系,這里應(yīng)該是“becauseofthis”比較合理。很有意思的是,有一次我上課問(wèn)學(xué)生什么是“遞進(jìn)”,舉個(gè)中文的例子給我看,竟然沒(méi)有學(xué)生能夠舉出恰當(dāng)?shù)闹形睦?梢?jiàn)很多學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)都是人云亦云,對(duì)一些概念其實(shí)根本不理解。5:however被認(rèn)為是ontheotherhand的同義詞例子:Workingfromhomehasbenefitedmanypeople.However,itcancauseproblems.評(píng)講:however一般是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,也就是后面的句子意思往往代表作者的首要立場(chǎng)。而ontheotherhand一般是并列關(guān)系,也就是前后句子或者觀(guān)點(diǎn)沒(méi)有輕重之分,是并列的,一般是兩個(gè)事情的對(duì)比,而不是轉(zhuǎn)折。6:bydoingthis,inthisway被認(rèn)為是asaresult,therefore,asaconsequence等例子:Manypeopleworklonghours.Bydoingthis,theymaysufferpoorhealth.評(píng)講:一般bydoingthis,inthisway都是用在人們有計(jì)劃地做某個(gè)事情,最后為了達(dá)到一定目的,或者效果。那么,顯然不可能后面出現(xiàn)不好的結(jié)果,譬如說(shuō)poorhealth。因此在這里用asaresult最好。7:asaresult,therefore,thus,asaconsequence都是連接詞,而不是連詞例子:manypeopletodayprefertousemobilephonestocommunicatewiththeirfriends,asaresult,theface-to-facecontactdeclines.評(píng)講:asaresult類(lèi)似于副詞,沒(méi)有連詞的功能,所以前面要用句號(hào)或者;號(hào)8:thereby不是therefore的替換詞例子:ManylibrarieshaveInternetconnectionnow,thereby,peoplecandoresearchonline.評(píng)講:thereby的習(xí)慣用法是thereby+doingsomething,不能違反這個(gè)規(guī)則,千萬(wàn)不要以為thereby用了比therefore高大上9:inorderto一般是表示有目的地去做某個(gè)事情,要注意邏輯主語(yǔ),而且一般不會(huì)用否定例子:Governmentsshouldnotinvestinthearts,inordertosavemoney.評(píng)講:這個(gè)句子用否定讀起來(lái)很不通順,用governmentsshouldcutdownonthespendingonthearts,inordertosavemoney.10:with如果加名詞,往往是表示“有了…”,后面一般不加負(fù)面的東西例子:Withpollution,manypeoplewillhavehealthproblems.評(píng)講:pollution是不好的東西,用with很怪異,用becauseof好一點(diǎn)...