寫作題目:
In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. What are the main causes of this phenomenon? Give some suggestions to them.
寫作題目講解:
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寫作范文:
Children will be happy when their family environment is not confusing, and you may as well be sure that their happiness does not simply rely on being richer, safer and healthier. In some countries, children being spoiled one way or another do not appear to be as happy as they are thought to be, due mainly to their parents' wrong attitudes concerning respect and discipline. It is possible that you could make your child happier if you could remember to act like an adult and not a child, and also as a boss and not as a friend that you intend to be.
當(dāng)孩子們的家庭環(huán)境不混亂時(shí),孩子們會(huì)很高興,你也可以肯定他們的幸福不僅是依賴更富裕、更安全和更健康。在一些國家,孩子被寵壞的方式似乎不像他們想象的那么幸福,主要是因?yàn)楦改笇?duì)尊重和紀(jì)律的錯(cuò)誤態(tài)度。你可能會(huì)讓你的孩子更快樂,如果你能記住像成年人而不是孩子那樣表現(xiàn),也可以作為一個(gè)老板而不是朋友。
Likewise, a child is not happy if discipline is missing at home. You ought to act like a boss and tell your children when they do wrong and correct them, and even punish them if necessary, because this could help make a child happier at heart. It may be said that a happy child is one who is taught to distinguish what is the right thing to do and what is not. In other words, young children in particular need parents to have authority to run the family government properly, otherwise the situation might turn out to be confusing sometimes. These days, there are cases in which children seem to be in charge, as this can be seen in the way parents obey their children. Also, it is not uncommon nowadays that the parent-child relationship is apparently based on peer friendship rather than family discipline, thus allowing a child to feel like an "unhappy" commander-in-chief in the family.
同樣,如果家里缺少紀(jì)律,孩子也不高興。你應(yīng)該表現(xiàn)得像個(gè)老板,告訴你的孩子什么時(shí)候做錯(cuò)了,糾正他們,如果必要的話,甚至懲罰他們,因?yàn)檫@樣可以讓孩子心里更快樂?梢哉f,一個(gè)快樂的孩子是被教導(dǎo)去分辨什么是正確的事情,什么是不正確的。換言之,幼兒特別需要父母有權(quán)力管理好家庭政府,否則情況有時(shí)會(huì)令人困惑。現(xiàn)在,有些情況下,孩子似乎是負(fù)責(zé)的,因?yàn)檫@可以從父母服從孩子的方式看出。而且,現(xiàn)在親子關(guān)系顯然建立在同伴友誼的基礎(chǔ)上而不是建立在家庭紀(jì)律之上,這并非不尋常,因此讓孩子感覺自己是家中的“不幸!苯y(tǒng)帥。
As an adult and boss, both parents are supposed to understand that their children could be even happier if they are asked to follow the rules regarding respect and discipline. Of course, money, safety and health are always important to childhood happiness; nevertheless, a child should be treated strictly as a child without causing any confusion. For that matter, you cannot expect a very confused child to be very happy, can you?
作為成年人和老板,父母都應(yīng)該明白,如果要求孩子遵守有關(guān)尊重和紀(jì)律的規(guī)則,他們的孩子會(huì)更幸福。當(dāng)然,金錢、安全和健康對(duì)童年的幸福總是很重要的,然而,孩子應(yīng)該被嚴(yán)格地當(dāng)作孩子對(duì)待,而不會(huì)造成任何混亂。對(duì)于這件事,你不能期望一個(gè)非常困惑的孩子會(huì)很快樂,對(duì)吧?
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